Title: Us Dead To (Not misspelled, mind you!)
Fandom: NCIS
Characters: Ziva David, Abby Sciuto,
Category: Angst
Genre:
Slash
Prompt: #30 Death
Word Count: 100
Rating: G
Summary: Angst.  Pure and simple.   Oddly, no character death. 
Author's Note:  Yeah, I dunno where this came from.  But except for the stuff I've been forcing myself to write for deadlines, I've been dealing with DWB.  This is my crappy just write something for Sith's sake response to that.
Disclaimer: These characters belong to DPB, CBS, Paramount, et al. No copyright infringement is intended.


It’s breakfast and a kiss on the lips on the way out the door.  Abby grabs her jacket and follows her.  She stops for Caf-Pow.

 

It’s dinner and she’s still in her lab, processing evidence for Gibbs.  She waits for a print-out from her Mass-Spec and wonders when Ziva will drop in.  Ziva hasn’t come down to Abby’s lab all day.

 

It’s past midnight and Abby’s still working.  The Director comes down to her lab and apologizes.

 

In all the confusion…so much going on…Ziva’s gone back…gone home

 

And it’s like she’s dead now because there is nothing for them anymore.


From: [identity profile] smackalalala.livejournal.com


OMG, that totally killed me. I'm trying not to cry. OMG. Plus I'm listening to "Chasing Cars," which is such an NCIS song for me. Gah. Emotional overload, I tell you. Beautiful heartwrenching angsty work. I love angst something awful, gotta say it. I'm such a masochist.

From: [identity profile] hhhellcat.livejournal.com


Ouch! Wow, poor Abby. It's amazing how much you convey in just 100 words.

From: [identity profile] demoka.livejournal.com


You've got me VERY worried. I hope this is completely AU and not at all hinting at what will happen!
Beautifully written and painfully short. The emotion is captured so succintly. Well done!
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