Title: The Real Thing
Fandom: NCIS
Characters:
Ziva David, Abby Sciuto
Category: Romance
Genre:
Femslash
Word Count:
479
Spoilers:
7.10 Faith
Summary:
"I could never eat you, Abby."
Rating: R
Disclaimer:
These characters belong to DPB, CBS, Paramount, et al. No copyright infringement is intended.
Author's Note:
Look, my brain takes the first opportunity to hop on the gutter bus any place, any time. This time isn't any different. So...yeah. That's all I have to say about this.


"I could never eat you, Abby." She repeats Ziva's with a mocking lilt, unable to hold back the slightest whimper that manages to escape her lips. "Oh, you're evil, David," she murmurs to herself, trying to push aside the images that Ziva oh-so-purposefully conjured with her supposedly-innocent statement.

One hand is buried in dark, curly hair. Her fingers tangle in it and sweat-dampened strands cling to her wrist. Abby's other hand is clutching desperately at the sheets. The knuckles of both hands have gone white from the pressure of her grip.

"Ziva!" The other woman's name trips off her tongue and almost gets lost in a gasp as she arches up off the bed, almost unable to stand the sensations coursing through her body. It's too much and not enough. She needs more.

Her wrist flexes and she urges Ziva closer, deeper, faster. Ziva obliges and gives her just what she needs, drawing out her exquisite torture until Abby is begging and panting, her whole word narrowed down to a single focus. Then, and only then, does Ziva push her over the edge.

A kiss on the inside of her thigh, the juncture of her hip, the sensitive skin just below her belly button, all the way up her chest, the place where her pulse throbs at the base of her neck and then finally on her lips. With each kiss her world expands again from the pinpoint of focus that Ziva had created until she is awoken again, energy coursing back through her body once more. She pulls Ziva closer, but this time it's her lips that meet Ziva's, hungrily clinging and tasting.


Abby shakes her head, tossing her pigtails as a shudder runs through her from head to toe. "You didn't seem to mind last night," she whispers to no one at all.

"I prefer the real thing."

Abby jumps, her hand leaping to her heart. "You scared me. What have I told you about lurking?" She demanded.

"That you do not mind it as much as you once did." Ziva counters, leaning against the frame of the sliding glass door that partitioned off her office. "You find the Super Spy thing to be sexy, yes?" She says with a confidence that belies her question.

"Yes," Abby agrees, stepping closer. She frowns and stops where she is. "That was mean. Saying something like that at work." Her eyes narrow to a glare. "No fair geting me all hot and bothered and leaving me distracted for the rest of the day."

Ziva pushes away from the wall and closes the distance between them, her hands coming to rest on Abby's hips. The tips of her fingers find skin under the hem of her t-shirt. "Then you should not have offered when I could not have what I truly wanted - not some poor imitation of flour and sugar."

From: [identity profile] lynxycrowy.livejournal.com


So I'm not the only one who noticed that comment?

I'm not crazy after all!

This was amazing...sexyness and Zabbyness and *drool*

From: [identity profile] jaina47.livejournal.com


God, no. There were a lot of peeps who noticed that comment...and who's brain got sent to a happy place.

From: [identity profile] lynxycrowy.livejournal.com


My parents stared at me funny when I turned bright red and started giggling when Ziva said that.

Oh well. They already know that I'm crazy.

From: [identity profile] tinlizzie82.livejournal.com


As soon as I heard that comment I went right there. They even left a nice pause to let it sink in. Nice fic.

From: [identity profile] jaina47.livejournal.com


Yeah, I believe I snickered as soon as I heard that line. :D

From: [identity profile] lisaof9.livejournal.com


Great follow up to the episode!
I am so glad I was not the only one whose mind dove into the gutter with the cookie comment.
I just WISH Abby had actually said, "You didn't seem to mind last night" as she did in your story. It could have been played as Abby just playing with Ziva and it would have set the LJ world on fire. Oh well. When I want great Ziva/Abby interaction, I look here and I am not disappointed.
Well done.
Lisa

From: [identity profile] jaina47.livejournal.com


I think if Abby had actually said that my head might have exploded. :p

Glad you enjoyed the fic! :D

From: [identity profile] demoka.livejournal.com


omg i spoiled myself....! *bonks self on head* XP well, by the time I watch it won't remmeber, but when the line is said, I'll probably get a lightbulb!

ooh, sexy!

From: [identity profile] jaina47.livejournal.com


Yeah, it's not really that big of a line. I imagine it only stood out to femslashers and peeps with a dirty mind, both groups of which I belong.

From: [identity profile] jaina47.livejournal.com


Hehe! Thank you. I didn't think I would be the only one to get that, but it is nice to know I had lots of company! :D

From: [identity profile] commasplice103.livejournal.com


and, there ya go! =D lovely addition to my morning coffee. Ah, happy place.

From: [identity profile] jaina47.livejournal.com


Oh, yeah. This was begging to be written. I couldn't just let that comment go.

From: [identity profile] tigersmind.livejournal.com


I'm not a slash fan but this was a pretty good ficlet. Good characterizations and very steamy... Scenes. LOL Job well done. ;)


From: [identity profile] jaina47.livejournal.com


Thanks for checking it out anyway! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

From: [identity profile] sinjenkai.livejournal.com


Oh thank you for this. It is better than anything I could come up with.

From: [identity profile] jaina47.livejournal.com


I don't know about that, but I'm glad you liked it. I just couldn't let that comment go without writing something about it. :D

From: [identity profile] ashley-pitt.livejournal.com


Hee... I thought I heard a collective "squee" when Ziva uttered those words.

Very nice story
Edited Date: 2009-12-18 12:08 am (UTC)

From: [identity profile] jaina47.livejournal.com


Lol! Sometimes I think the writers are totally just screwing with us, you know?
ariestess: (Default)

From: [personal profile] ariestess


How the hell did I miss that comment? I'll have to go back and rewatch...

And this was yummy!

Any chance I can archive and/or link this on Frisked & Conquered? [since it doesn't seem to be part of your table]

From: [identity profile] jaina47.livejournal.com


It's in the Abby!Gingerbread scene. :D

Sure thing! Just for the record, you can have any of my fics that you or Shatterpath happen to want. :)

From: [identity profile] magicmumu.livejournal.com


Ah, now this is a good fic. I wish I had seen the part in the episode, but I love how the writers love to give a little tease to the fans of the show, especially if they know and acknowledge that people write such fanfiction about the characters already and just feed the fire. Thanks for fanning the flames!!

Erin

From: [identity profile] joran.livejournal.com


I was so behind on watching that episode, and then I heard the line and commented immediately to [livejournal.com profile] geonncannon. Hee. But this fic exceeds my own imagination! Well done!

I see where Ziva's coming from on the cupcake thing. But...cupcake...


From: [identity profile] steppenwolf-20.livejournal.com


Oh yes, I laughed so hard, when Ziva said that on the show. And I sooo hoped somebody would pick it up.

And you did! Thanks for sharing. Very cute and Oh So Hot!!
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