Otalia Beta?

[jaina47]

Okay, so I wrote another Otalia fic.  It's a loose sequel to Until I Can Breathe Again. 

Does anyone mind taking a look at it for me? I need help with typos/characterization, and really anything else that you want to say about it!

Comments

[xamanthe.livejournal.com]

I'll be happy to look at it. I was going to offer last night but knew I couldn't get to it until Sat afternoon. If you still want a beta on it, send it to xamanthe AT aol DOT com.

[jaina47.livejournal.com]

Thank you, thank you, thank you! I really appreciate it. :)