I flipped that line several ways, and it's still not clear. What I was aiming for was that she's not jealous of him, spending time with another woman, she's jealous of Ziva paying attention to him. If that at all came out right.
At any rate, I changed of to over. Maybe that helped. *sigh*
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Date: 2007-08-30 11:05 pm (UTC)I flipped that line several ways, and it's still not clear. What I was aiming for was that she's not jealous of him, spending time with another woman, she's jealous of Ziva paying attention to him. If that at all came out right.
At any rate, I changed of to over. Maybe that helped. *sigh*