Oh, that was so beautiful. I love how you explore Ziva's character - it's so refreshing to see, especially when the majority of fic about Ziva tends to be her in a relationship with Tony & not really being her own person. I try to flesh my characters out when I write them, and I think you've done a great job here. (I've been meaning to read this since I first saw it posted, but I was always short on time, so I FINALLY got around to it tonight.) Yes, nice work. There are some grammatical/verb tense issues here and there, but that doesn't detract too much from the overall story. :)
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Date: 2007-08-08 10:55 pm (UTC)