Date: 2010-11-12 08:04 pm (UTC)
Just caught up on the last few chapters, I still like the pacing and how your handling the conflicts within and between characters. Though Rafe may run to tell Frank, I really don't think that's a pre-rec to Frank being a huge problem. I assume the holy asshole trinity will stand, Rafe, Father Ray and Frank. Looking forward to seeing how you write Frank. You've never really seen the male ego lash out until you tell them something like what Natalia's going to tell Frank. The more they see themselves as the knight in shining armor protecting the fair damsel in distress, the worse they take it.
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