Okay ya'll I've got the last two parts and the epilogue written for The Importance of Family, now I just need someone to look it over. The main thing I'm interested in is typos, plot, characterization or any other more technical writing insights you might have. Criticism is appreciated. The first chunk is about 5,000 words long and the second two total about 6,400. I kind of want to get this posted sometime soon so that's why I'm searching for a beta.
Any volunteers? The help would be very much appreciated.
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