Date: 2010-01-05 07:33 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Beautifully crafted story. I was wondering how it could possibly resolve within 8 segments, but it did without feeling rushed or forced. The voices of all the characters ring true as real people, and this last installment was perfect in capturing Ziva's unusual (though certainly warranted) unease and Abby's gradual understanding. Congratulations on finishing the table, and thanks for sharing!
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