Thanks! I have to give my betas some credit for those first lines though. I had a weaker paragraph there before and at their urgings I did some re-writes that I hope turned out much better than what I had at the time. :D
Heh. Poor Natalia. She always looked so uncomfortable anytime Frank kissed her. It was so hard to watch. :|
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Date: 2009-08-03 01:59 am (UTC)Heh. Poor Natalia. She always looked so uncomfortable anytime Frank kissed her. It was so hard to watch. :|