Date: 2009-07-24 02:25 pm (UTC)
You can find it here (http://incandescentfire.com/index.php?showtopic=1940).

It's not so much the grammar/writing of it that's killing me, really. It's the destruction of everything that I love about the characters and their relationship. It's the ludicrous, implausible and out of character way that the idea was executed. It's how there's never any explanation of why a character is doing something that really, really demands an explanation.

I just...damn, I might end up doing this anyway.

Oh, that and it got seventeen comments requesting more. And people wonder why I doubt the quality of my writing when everyone just comments that they love it?
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