Date: 2009-07-10 12:04 pm (UTC)
Brava, my dear ... very well done indeed! The way it should have been handled.

Though it does poke at a question that's been playing hide and seek in my brain since 7/4. The mentioning of such will probably have my name cursed across the boards - if not actually lynched ...

But it did seem a little odd, didn't it, that Natalia didn't take her own car to the retreat? That Blake was driving her? How did she plan to get back (assuming of course that she's not expecting Olivia to come charging after her)?

That Blake asked her if she was "sure about this"? What exactly is "this"? Going off on a retreat - or something else?

No, no wait... I'm not saying that Natalia's character would ever think that way (because honestly, as they had written her before this debacle of a s/l, she wouldn't - and obviously didn't in the past)

(Putting on my best "innocent blank face" while seeing the outline of an angry mob, torches blazing, rising in the distance)

Ummm... I should probably ... be going now. Right. Again, (thumbs up) great job.

(Walking backwards quickly) Anyone see which direction Blake took off in? Maybe I can get directions to that hidden retreat! (Turning and breaking into a full run, as shouts of 'get her'and 'there she is' echo across the field)





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