Date: 2009-01-13 08:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zephyr-tempest.livejournal.com
Wow. Amazing beginning to what promises to be an excellent story.

Definately loving the characterisation, and the interaction between the two of them. The writing style is very interesting, and works well.

Looking forward to the next chapter.
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