*happy sigh* As always, the finished product just makes me smile like an idiot. You're grasp of the characters and the tension between them is wonderful. I really like that you didnt rush this chapter. I remember saying i wanted you to hurry it up, but reading it again, I think you totally made the right choice. This is better. Its much mroe Ivy and Rachel and it shows the growth of thier relationship and the depth of their (at least Rachel's) feelings that she thinks about what Ivy needs most.
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Date: 2008-09-23 12:46 am (UTC)Can't wait for the next bit!