jaina47: (Otaliakiss)
jaina47 ([personal profile] jaina47) wrote2009-05-08 09:45 pm
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Otalia Beta?

Okay, so I wrote another Otalia fic.  It's a loose sequel to Until I Can Breathe Again. 

Does anyone mind taking a look at it for me? I need help with typos/characterization, and really anything else that you want to say about it!
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