So I read the entire story... and to be frank, something was missing. Maybe the overuse of sexuality was off as well. I know that this A/U obviously if Abby and Ziva and Jenny are snogging, but really? I was really hoping this would have been different. One of those stories where I read it and can actually see it happening. I think that's whats missing. I can't see this happening in any world. It was rushed and Ziva's sexuality was too pushed in the face. I can see her snogging Abby somewhere wayyyy down the road, but in 4 chapters, no. There was so much story not told in this. I was definitely let down. I am sorry...