Well. *sniffles* You've done a great job of delving into Natalia's mind and making her choice to run understandable. Especially this bit: This time, Natalia had failed her. She had made a mistake - one that there was no fixing or eliminating - and Natalia had no idea what to say or do about that. In her experience, mistakes like this one were crushing and unforgivable.
It's interesting that both Olivia and Natalia have terrified 16 year olds inside that drive their panicked reactions to things.
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You've done a great job of delving into Natalia's mind and making her choice to run understandable. Especially this bit: This time, Natalia had failed her. She had made a mistake - one that there was no fixing or eliminating - and Natalia had no idea what to say or do about that. In her experience, mistakes like this one were crushing and unforgivable.
It's interesting that both Olivia and Natalia have terrified 16 year olds inside that drive their panicked reactions to things.