ext_225465 ([identity profile] bsofthewest.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] jaina47 2010-10-29 12:57 pm (UTC)

NOW would be the PERFECT time to jump the story line and send her back to Olivia to fess up and not put her through a month of misery! NOW
also
I loved this:
"In the end, it always came back to Olivia. With Olivia, it was more than just want or need, Olivia claimed every part of her without even trying. She saw things in Natalia that Natalia had never even imagined in herself. Olivia freed her, pushed her and demanded more of her. It was exhilarating and terrifying at the same time."

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