ext_32007 ([identity profile] revolos55.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] jaina47 2009-09-05 03:43 pm (UTC)

"What the hell?" The startled verbal explosion from behind her whips Olivia around and brings her face to face with Rafe. - Figured it was him.

Olivia's voice looses its harsh edge - I think you meant "loses"

"You do look hot though." She can't resist the little emphasis on the next to last word. She's Olivia Spencer. Loving Natalia might have changed her in so many ways - mostly all for the good - but she's no saint. - Hehe

"He's angry right now, and he doesn't know how to deal with it, so it's coming out at everyone." / Natalia gives her a startled look. "When did you get so perceptive?" / Olivia lets out a slightly bitter laugh. "This may come as a surprise to you, but I happen to know something about that kind of anger." - Oooh, neat.

"This is why you've been so happy lately?" - Awww :D

She knows this side of Natalia. It's the same side that kept her alive through the weeks in the hospital when she wanted to die, the one that pursued her when she was afraid this love would be too much for Natalia to handle. But Olivia isn't used to seeing Natalia act like this with other people. She really likes it. - Neat

You would have made him a very luck man. - "lucky"

Whether I wanted to admit it or not, Olivia had already had my heart for a long time. I didn't mean to lead Frank on. I'm sorry that I hurt him, but I couldn't keep hurting Olivia - Cool!!

OK, the whole bit from when Buzz says Olivia deserves love to the asterisks is one big poke in the heart. Total squee and awww.

But she is not Olivia, and she doesn't want to be. They are the perfect balance for each other as they are. - Neat!

"Apparently not as much as you and Olivia." - Shut up Frank. ...oh that felt good. It's been weird to not hate Frank when watching the show.

Ooh, I would have loved to see a convo between Phillip and Frank on the show; Frank fighting for his baby and the love he has for Natalia, Phillip fighting for what's best for Emma and Olivia.

Something about wanting to ask if you'd confirmed some details for a luncheon? - Hehehe, Otalia's 'Coming Out' luncheon, maybe? ;)

"No matter how scary standing out in the open with you is, I don't want to have to live in shadows and hide. There is nothing wrong with the way I feel about you. I love you, and I want to be with you. I might forget that, and I might be scared sometimes, but I won't ever stop wanting what we have. Showing that to people...I'm not loud. I don't make statements or attract attention. I'm good at keeping my head down and following the rules. Today reminded me of the goodness in people. It's so easy to be overwhelmed by everyone who's upset, that I forget about everyone else. - Love that.

Olivia sighs. "Everything is always my fault." / "Oh please," Natalia remains unimpressed with her dramatics. "You love every minute of it, you troublemaker." - Hehehe

Dig the bit about it being a perfect day.

I didn't expect," Olivia continues softly, "to fall in love with you. I never thought I would want to live on a farm out in the country more than anywhere else in the world. I didn't expect to become the person that I am today, but all of that is because of you, and I don't regret a minute of it. I want you to know that." - Very cool.

she knows when this moment is over the first thing that she'll do is look around. The thought of people watching them, judging them still makes her tremble. / If someone is watching them and they may well be, Natalia will feel it and be aware of it, but she won't let it stop her. She won't let it make her regret this moment, because Natalia is right where she wants to be, ending the night in Olivia's arms. - I dig that.

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