*is giddy* Josh is awesome! And you're awesome! This has to be what I regret most about the direction the writers went in - that we never got to see Olivia being deliriously happy with Natalia by her side at the Bauer BBQ.
I know! I want another deliriously happy public moment on the show. But there are so many others that I want too. :( *sigh* I hate that it's going to be over so soon.
Fantastic chapter. So utterly sweet and fluffy but with a realistic basis for their thoughts and actions, and a little of their nervousness showing through. So beautifully characterised. I especially loved the line, "There's no one here - except, perhaps, for Phillip - who's opinion Olivia cares about only because she wants his cooperation to make Emma's life as uncomplicated as possible." Although I may have changed it a little 'about, and only'. Yes. I'm picky. I know.
Your pickiness has been noted and your suggestion used. :) Thank you.
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Date: 2009-09-05 03:15 am (UTC)I know! I want another deliriously happy public moment on the show. But there are so many others that I want too. :( *sigh* I hate that it's going to be over so soon.
Fantastic chapter. So utterly sweet and fluffy but with a realistic basis for their thoughts and actions, and a little of their nervousness showing through. So beautifully characterised. I especially loved the line, "There's no one here - except, perhaps, for Phillip - who's opinion Olivia cares about only because she wants his cooperation to make Emma's life as uncomplicated as possible." Although I may have changed it a little 'about, and only'. Yes. I'm picky. I know.
Your pickiness has been noted and your suggestion used. :) Thank you.