You know, I wasn't actually that big on Ben/Tahiri myself. That scene in Invincible really squicked me out, but I was challenged to write the pairing and so I wanted to come up with a way to make it work for me that didn't involve me being grossed out. This is what I came up with so I'm really glad it worked for you too.

I don't mind nitpicky at all! Sadly I've stared at this story for so long that I can't even see it anymore and I don't know any SW folks anymore who'd still be willing to beta for me, but I'll probably make little changes and updates to make it better every time I come back to it. :D

Sorry about the long review... :)

Please don't apologize! I adore long reviews! :D